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I love you.
Do you?
I need you.
Do you?
All these things I feel might be absurd.
Do you want a word?
I bet you do.

There's nothing to say anymore.
Please say something.
But I won't be home.
So don't pick up the phone.
I'll be back next week.
Will you be there too?
Please do, I don't want to feel blue
anymore.

I came back today.
I think I'm going to stay.
Well what do you have to say?

You met someone new.
©2009 ~spazchibi
:iconspazchibi:

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:iconms-arty:
I really loved the ending.
It's a little less coherent then the other writings you did that I've read, but I still like it.

like I said, you have a way with words :nod:
:iconspazchibi:
thanks so much lovie!
:hug:
and thanks for another fav!

--
Under the Moonfluence.

"Some things look better with a few dents in it. " ~Keith Moon
:iconsallyface90:
I couldn't help but get really
thoughtful with this. It's so
sad in a way, because it's like
you have this deep hope only to be let down.
Another great job!

--
I like to deep sea fish a lot.----John Entwistle
:icondei-sempai:
Oh my God, this is so sad ;____;

(Which means you did a great job... as always...)

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:sun:
:iconspazchibi:
aw.
thanks!

--
Under the Moonfluence.

"Some things look better with a few dents in it. " ~Keith Moon
:iconspazchibi:
thanks.
you know what's sad?
i wrote this...
'cause i feel this.

--
Under the Moonfluence.

"Some things look better with a few dents in it. " ~Keith Moon
:iconsallyface90:
That's not sad, luff.
It's perfectly fine. I get that way a lot,
too.
:hug:

--
I like to deep sea fish a lot.----John Entwistle
:iconspazchibi:
:)

--
Under the Moonfluence.

"Some things look better with a few dents in it. " ~Keith Moon

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