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Oh my lovely,
Oh my dear.
Please stay near.
You know I need you.

On my lovely,
Oh my dear.
Please don't fear.
You know I love you.

Oh my lovely,
Oh my dear.
Please my love,
If you get a beer
I'd like one too.
You know I would never want anyone new.

Oh I love you.
Do you?
©2009 ~spazchibi
:iconspazchibi:

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:iconpippin-the-mercury:
I like this one. It's short, but it gets the point across well in very few words. The repetition at the beginning sort of to me gets the idea that the narrator of the song really wants to get the idea across. And I don't know if you were thinking about this, but I like that the very last bit is quite ambiguous in its meaning. (Either it means "I love you, do you love me?" or "I love you, do you love yourself?") I like it because it can change the song's meaning.

Anyway, nice song! Even though I don't comment on them a lot, I really do like reading the songs you write. You should definitely keep up your lyrical pursuits. I think it's a good thing for you to be into.

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:iconspazchibi:
Thanks lovie! :hug:
You wanna know what I was thinking of when I wrote this?

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Under the Moonfluence.

"Some things look better with a few dents in it. " ~Keith Moon
:iconms-arty:
I always enjoy reading your lyrics :nod:
for some reason, I find it Paul Mccartney-ish...
:iconspazchibi:
hmmm.
That's weird.
Before I even saw this comment Paulie just came into my mind. :hmm:

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Under the Moonfluence.

"Some things look better with a few dents in it. " ~Keith Moon
:iconjarethswoman:
what were you thinking when you wrote this???

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"I move the stars for no one"
-Jareth

Jareth looked deep into my eyes, slid his tounge into my mouth and fingered me hard. I knew I was finished.

"Not letting you in won't satisfy me; I'll teach you about loss."
:iconms-arty:
YOU HAVE JEDI MINDREAD POWERS....
>.<

well anyway... it reminds me of those love-songs Paul always used to write. I love those so much. they're refreshing and easy for the ear.
:iconpippin-the-mercury:
Ha, very few people call me stuff like that. I think terms like "lovie" are cool, very British-sounding...

Sure. I'm always curious what people were thinking when they made their art pieces. Tell me!

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And there you have it.

The Pure State art movement - proving that you don't have to be on drugs to make psychedelic art!

The lyrics community!
:iconspazchibi:
idk
why?

--
Under the Moonfluence.

"Some things look better with a few dents in it. " ~Keith Moon
:iconspazchibi:
i was thinking:
I hope dinner is ready soon :hmm:
XD

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Under the Moonfluence.

"Some things look better with a few dents in it. " ~Keith Moon

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